Rhetorical Analysis after Peer Review

After peer review today I noticed a lot of things about my paper that not only the person who read my paper pointed out, but things I noticed after. I think I need to put my own opinion in my paper more. I know I have a lot of facts right now, but that's really all it is. Hopefully I'll be able to get enough information to write all 6 pages of this paper. I really do like my topic though I found out after some research that it's an even bigger issue than I realized. I never knew there was problems like harrassment going on during interviews. Women really do struggle a lot in this field of work.